From 3859a5b5aa65b4ece47b173fca78b2e93400f22e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Renis <renis.makadia@att.com>
Date: Fri, 2 Mar 2018 10:48:29 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] Fixes/Updates OSH Developer and Multinode install guide

This PS fixes few typos and adds DNS entry update section
to notify user.

Change-Id: I59f5c90aaa06a5996c3ddb7a7b1bd3c4adfe0eb7
---
 .../install/developer/deploy-with-ceph.rst    |  4 ++++
 .../install/developer/deploy-with-nfs.rst     |  4 ++++
 .../developer/kubernetes-and-common-setup.rst |  6 ++++++
 doc/source/install/multinode.rst              | 20 +++++++++++++++----
 4 files changed, 30 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/source/install/developer/deploy-with-ceph.rst b/doc/source/install/developer/deploy-with-ceph.rst
index 2e09cee37a..ec802f70f3 100644
--- a/doc/source/install/developer/deploy-with-ceph.rst
+++ b/doc/source/install/developer/deploy-with-ceph.rst
@@ -2,6 +2,10 @@
 Deployment With Ceph
 ====================
 
+.. note::
+  For other deployment options, select appropriate ``Deployment with ...``
+  option from `Index <../developer/index.html>`__ page.
+
 Deploy Ceph
 ^^^^^^^^^^^
 
diff --git a/doc/source/install/developer/deploy-with-nfs.rst b/doc/source/install/developer/deploy-with-nfs.rst
index 1da35cd6a5..0b2f5a5945 100644
--- a/doc/source/install/developer/deploy-with-nfs.rst
+++ b/doc/source/install/developer/deploy-with-nfs.rst
@@ -2,6 +2,10 @@
 Deployment With NFS
 ===================
 
+.. note::
+  For other deployment options, select appropriate ``Deployment with ...``
+  option from `Index <../developer/index.html>`__ page.
+
 Deploy NFS Provisioner
 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
 
diff --git a/doc/source/install/developer/kubernetes-and-common-setup.rst b/doc/source/install/developer/kubernetes-and-common-setup.rst
index 6abb986a1c..ded5ebeb27 100644
--- a/doc/source/install/developer/kubernetes-and-common-setup.rst
+++ b/doc/source/install/developer/kubernetes-and-common-setup.rst
@@ -26,6 +26,12 @@ should be cloned:
     git clone https://git.openstack.org/openstack/openstack-helm.git
 
 
+.. note::
+  This installation, by default will use Google DNS servers, 8.8.8.8 or 8.8.4.4
+  and updates resolv.conf. These DNS nameserver entries can be changed by
+  updating file ``/opt/openstack-helm-infra/tools/images/kubeadm-aio/assets/opt/playbooks/vars.yaml``
+  under section ``external_dns_nameservers``.
+
 Deploy Kubernetes & Helm
 ------------------------
 
diff --git a/doc/source/install/multinode.rst b/doc/source/install/multinode.rst
index 79d5ee7abd..d87aa519f0 100644
--- a/doc/source/install/multinode.rst
+++ b/doc/source/install/multinode.rst
@@ -55,9 +55,9 @@ On the worker nodes
 
     #!/bin/bash
     set -xe
-    apt-get update
-    apt-get install --no-install-recommends -y \
-            git
+    sudo apt-get update
+    sudo apt-get install --no-install-recommends -y \
+                 git
 
 
 SSH-Key preparation
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ should be cloned onto each node in the cluster:
     #!/bin/bash
     set -xe
 
-    chown -R ubuntu: /opt
+    sudo chown -R ubuntu: /opt
     git clone https://git.openstack.org/openstack/openstack-helm-infra.git /opt/openstack-helm-infra
     git clone https://git.openstack.org/openstack/openstack-helm.git /opt/openstack-helm
 
@@ -141,6 +141,15 @@ On the master node create an environment file for the cluster:
         domain: cluster.local
     EOF
 
+
+.. note::
+  This installation, by default will use Google DNS servers, 8.8.8.8 or 8.8.4.4
+  and updates resolv.conf. These DNS nameserver entries can be changed by
+  updating file ``/openstack-helm-infra/tools/images/kubeadm-aio/assets/opt/playbooks/vars.yaml``
+  under section ``external_dns_nameservers``. This change must be done on each
+  node in your cluster.
+
+
 Run the playbooks
 -----------------
 
@@ -157,6 +166,9 @@ On the master node run the playbooks:
 Deploy OpenStack-Helm
 =====================
 
+.. note::
+  The following commands all assume that they are run from the ``openstack-helm`` directory.
+
 Setup Clients on the host and assemble the charts
 -------------------------------------------------