From 97161a9e3c5c871fb843bbb6cc76d6ee5c897823 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Shilla Saebi Date: Fri, 17 Jan 2014 12:52:18 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] module001-ch005-vm-provisioning-walk-through.xml clean up Run on sentence corrected. Added comma and period. theres was changed to there's since it means (there is). Change-Id: I403182fd042e6be05f841fa4793b0b6df4f39a04 --- module001-ch005-vm-provisioning-walk-through.xml | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/module001-ch005-vm-provisioning-walk-through.xml b/module001-ch005-vm-provisioning-walk-through.xml index de855feb..9a990f14 100644 --- a/module001-ch005-vm-provisioning-walk-through.xml +++ b/module001-ch005-vm-provisioning-walk-through.xml @@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ The OpenStack system copies the base image from the image store to local disk which is used as the first disk of the - instance (vda), having small images will result in faster start + instance (vda). Having small images will result in faster start up of your instances as less data needs to be copied across the network. The system also creates a new empty disk image to present as the second disk (vdb). Be aware that the second disk @@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ - Once you launch a VM in OpenStack, theres something more + Once you launch a VM in OpenStack, there's something more going on in the background. To understand what's happening behind the Dashboard, lets take a deeper dive into OpenStack’s VM provisioning. For launching a VM, you can either use