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<title>Brief Overview</title>
<para>OpenStack is a cloud operating system that controls large
pools of compute, storage, and networking resources throughout a
datacenter. It is all managed through a dashboard that gives
datacenter. It is all managed through a dashboard called Horizon, that gives
administrators control while empowering their users to provision
resources through a web interface.</para>
<para>OpenStack is a global collaboration of developers and cloud
computing technologists producing the ubiquitous open source cloud
computing technologists, producing the ubiquitous open source cloud
computing platform for public and private clouds. The project aims
to deliver solutions for all types of clouds by being</para>
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xlink:href="http://goo.gl/Ye9DFT"
>http://goo.gl/Ye9DFT</link></para>
<para><guilabel> OpenStack Foundation:</guilabel></para>
<para>The OpenStack Foundation, established September 2012, is an
independent body providing shared resources to help achieve the
<para>The OpenStack Foundation, established in September of 2012, is an
independent body, providing shared resources to help achieve the
OpenStack Mission by protecting, empowering, and promoting
OpenStack software and the community around it. This includes users,
developers and the entire ecosystem. For more information visit
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<para><guilabel>Who uses OpenStack?</guilabel></para>
<para>Corporations, service providers, VARS, SMBs, researchers,
and global data centers looking to deploy large-scale cloud
deployments for private or public clouds leveraging the support
deployments for private or public clouds, leveraging the support
and resulting technology of a global open source community. This is just
three years into OpenStack, it's new, it's yet to
mature and has immense possibilities. How do I say that? All
these ‘buzz words’ will fall into a properly solved jigsaw
puzzle as you go through this article.</para>
four years into OpenStack, it's new and has immense possibilities.</para>
<para><guilabel>It's Open Source:</guilabel></para>
<para>All of the code for OpenStack is freely available under the
Apache 2.0 license. Anyone can run it, build on it, or submit