From 96711431914f98de07a2c83e7726738f0f27cdde Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Shilla Saebi <shilla.saebi@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 26 Feb 2014 01:26:28 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] cleanup of module001-ch003-core-projects

changed to to that
provide changed to plural
added comma after among
removed run on sentence
it changed to They
removed extra spaces

Change-Id: I5256c06b7384df55df38ae90d01cd59f78bae5ec
---
 module001-ch003-core-projects.xml | 13 ++++++-------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/module001-ch003-core-projects.xml b/module001-ch003-core-projects.xml
index 932f2215..43fec3cd 100644
--- a/module001-ch003-core-projects.xml
+++ b/module001-ch003-core-projects.xml
@@ -2,13 +2,13 @@
 <chapter xmlns="http://docbook.org/ns/docbook" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0" xml:id="module001-ch003-core-projects">
   <title>OpenStack Projects, History, and Releases Overview</title>
   <para><guilabel>Project history and releases overview.</guilabel></para>
-  <para>OpenStack is a cloud computing project to provide an
+  <para>OpenStack is a cloud computing project that provides an
     infrastructure as a service (IaaS). It is free open source
     software released under the terms of the Apache License. The
     project is managed by the OpenStack Foundation, a non-profit
     corporate entity established in September 2012 to promote
     OpenStack software and its community.</para>
-  <para>More than 200 companies joined the project among which are
+  <para>More than 200 companies joined the project, among which are
     AMD, Brocade Communications Systems, Canonical, Cisco, Dell, EMC,
     Ericsson, Groupe Bull, HP, IBM, Inktank, Intel, NEC, Rackspace
     Hosting, Red Hat, SUSE Linux, VMware, and Yahoo!</para>
@@ -161,8 +161,7 @@
     <para>OpenStack is based on a coordinated 6-month release cycle
       with frequent development milestones. You can find a link to the
       current development release schedule here. The Release Cycle is
-      made of four major stages. Various OpenStack releases are named
-      as follows Various Companies Contributing to OpenStack</para>
+      made of four major stages.</para>
   <figure>
     <title>Various Projects under OpenStack</title>
     <mediaobject>
@@ -462,7 +461,7 @@
           <listitem>
             <para>OpenStack Networking manages IP addresses, allowing
               for dedicated static IPs or DHCP. Floating IPs allow
-              traffic to be dynamically rerouted to any of your
+              traffic to be dynamically re-routed to any of your
               compute resources, which allows you to redirect traffic
               during maintenance or in the case of failure.</para>
           </listitem>
@@ -551,7 +550,7 @@
   <para><guisubmenu>Image Service(Glance)</guisubmenu></para>
       <para>OpenStack Image Service (Glance) provides discovery,
         registration and delivery services for disk and server images.
-        Stored images can be used as a template. It can also be used
+        Stored images can be used as a template. They can also be used
         to store and catalog an unlimited number of backups. The Image
         Service can store disk and server images in a variety of
         back-ends, including OpenStack Object Storage. The Image
@@ -559,7 +558,7 @@
         information about disk images and lets clients stream the
         images to new servers.</para>
       <para>The Image Service can store disk and server images in a
-        variety of back-ends, including OpenStack Object Storage.  The
+        variety of back-ends, including OpenStack Object Storage. The
         Image Service API provides a standard REST interface for
         querying information about disk images and lets clients stream
         the images to new servers.</para>