diff --git a/doc/training-guides/basic-install-guide/section_basics-queue.xml b/doc/training-guides/basic-install-guide/section_basics-queue.xml index b787c93d..436fc928 100644 --- a/doc/training-guides/basic-install-guide/section_basics-queue.xml +++ b/doc/training-guides/basic-install-guide/section_basics-queue.xml @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ service typically runs on the controller node. OpenStack supports several message brokers including <application>RabbitMQ</application>, <application>Qpid</application>, and <application>ZeroMQ</application>. - However, most distributions that package OpenStack support a particular + Most distributions that package OpenStack support a particular message broker. This guide covers the RabbitMQ message broker which is supported by each distribution. If you prefer to implement a different message broker, consult the documentation associated @@ -61,11 +61,11 @@ message broker.</para> <note> <para>For production environments, you should create a unique account - with suitable password. For more information on securing the + with a suitable password. For more information on securing the message broker, see the <link xlink:href="https://www.rabbitmq.com/man/rabbitmqctl.1.man.html" >documentation</link>.</para> - <para>If you decide to create a unique account with suitable password + <para>If you decide to create a unique account with a suitable password for your test environment, you must configure the <literal>rabbit_userid</literal> and <literal>rabbit_password</literal> keys in the configuration file @@ -73,6 +73,6 @@ </note> </step> </procedure> - <para>Congratulations, now you are ready to install OpenStack + <para>Congratulations, you are now ready to install OpenStack services!</para> </section>