From 361d162ed17896b897d6aea29a922ffcf43b4958 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Shilla Saebi <shilla.saebi@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 25 Aug 2014 12:45:14 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] changes to section_basics-prerequisites
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changed doesn’t to does not
removed attempting and changed to starting
removed each before with and removed ,
added the before ability and changed snap shots to snapshots
added - after roll for roll-back
removed However and changed sentence
Change-Id: Ic011d0b8a35f55f0c3260c13e267ba4d8c6116b9
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.../section_basics-prerequisites.xml | 12 ++++++------
1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/training-guides/basic-install-guide/section_basics-prerequisites.xml b/doc/training-guides/basic-install-guide/section_basics-prerequisites.xml
index 7110b78a..aadd2a81 100644
--- a/doc/training-guides/basic-install-guide/section_basics-prerequisites.xml
+++ b/doc/training-guides/basic-install-guide/section_basics-prerequisites.xml
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
xml:id="basics-prerequisites">
<?dbhtml stop-chunking?>
<title>Before you begin</title>
- <para>For a functional environment, OpenStack doesn't require a
+ <para>For a functional environment, OpenStack does not require a
significant amount of resources. We recommend that your environment meets
or exceeds the following minimum requirements which can support several
minimal <glossterm>CirrOS</glossterm> instances:</para>
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
recommend a minimal installation of your Linux distribution. Also, we
strongly recommend that you install a 64-bit version of your distribution
on at least the compute node. If you install a 32-bit version of your
- distribution on the compute node, attempting to start an instance using
+ distribution on the compute node, starting an instance using
a 64-bit image will fail.</para>
<note>
<para>A single disk partition on each node works for most basic
@@ -38,20 +38,20 @@
</note>
<para>Many users build their test environments on
<glossterm baseform="virtual machine (VM)">virtual machines
- (VMs)</glossterm>. The primary benefits of VMs include the
+ (VMs)</glossterm>. The primary benefits of this method include the
following:</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
- <para>One physical server can support multiple nodes, each with almost
+ <para>One physical server can support multiple nodes with almost
any number of network interfaces.</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
- <para>Ability to take periodic "snap shots" throughout the installation
+ <para>The ability to take periodic "snapshots" throughout the installation
process and "roll back" to a working configuration in the event of
a problem.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
- <para>However, VMs will reduce performance of your instances, particularly
+ <para>VMs can result in slow instances, particularly
if your hypervisor and/or processor lacks support for hardware
acceleration of nested VMs.</para>
<note>