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OpenStack.</para>
<para>Instances are the individual virtual machines running on
physical compute nodes. The OpenStack Compute service manages
instances. Any number of instances maybe started from the same
instances. Any number of instances may be started from the same
image. Each instance is run from a copy of the base image so
runtime changes made by an instance do not change the image it
is based on. Snapshots of running instances may be taken which
create a new image based on the current disk state of a
particular instance.</para>
<para>When starting an instance a set of virtual resources known
<para>When starting an instance, a set of virtual resources known
as a flavor must be selected. Flavors define how many virtual
CPUs an instance has and the amount of RAM and size of its
ephemeral disks. OpenStack provides a number of predefined
flavors which cloud administrators may edit or add to. Users
must select from the set of available flavors defined on their
cloud.</para>
<para>Additional resources such as persistent volume storage and
<para>Additional resources such as persistent volume storage and a
public IP address may be added to and removed from running
instances. The examples below show the cinder-volume service
which provide persistent block storage as opposed to the
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storage rather than local disk. The details are left for later
chapters.</para>
<para><guilabel>End State</guilabel></para>
<para>Once the instance has served its purpose and is deleted
<para>Once the instance has served its purpose and is deleted,
all state is reclaimed, except the persistent volume. The
ephemeral storage is purged. Memory and vCPU resources are
released. And of course the image has remained unchanged
released. The image remains unchanged
throughout.</para>
<para>Figure 2.3. End state of image and volume after instance
exits</para>
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going on in the background. To understand what's happening
behind the dashboard, lets take a deeper dive into OpenStack's
VM provisioning. For launching a VM, you can either use
the command-line interfaces or the OpenStack dashboard.
the command-line interface or the OpenStack dashboard.
</para>
</chapter>