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<!--phrase os="debian">Debian 7.0 (Wheezy)</phrase-->
</titleabbrev>
<!-- para>
<para>The OpenStack® system consists of several key
projects that you install separately but that work
together depending on your cloud needs. These projects
<para>OpenStack® consists of several key
projects that are installed separately but work
together depending on the requirements of the users. These projects
include Compute, Identity Service, Networking, Image
Service, Block Storage, Object Storage, Telemetry,
Orchestration, and Database. You can install any of these
projects separately and configure them stand-alone or
Orchestration, and Database. These projects can be installed
separately and configured as a stand-alone project or
as connected entities. <phrase
os="debian">This guide walks through an
os="debian">This guide walks through the
installation by using packages available through
Debian 7.0 (code name: Wheezy).</phrase>
<phrase os="ubuntu">This guide walks through an
<phrase os="ubuntu">This guide will walk you through an
installation by using packages available through
Ubuntu 12.04 (LTS) or 14.04 (LTS).</phrase>
<phrase os="rhel;centos;fedora">This guide shows you
<phrase os="rhel;centos;fedora">This guide will show
how to install OpenStack by using packages
available through Fedora 20 as well as on Red Hat
available through Fedora 20 as well as with Red Hat
Enterprise Linux and its derivatives through the
EPEL repository.</phrase>
<phrase os="opensuse">This guide shows you how to