diff --git a/user-story-includes-template.xml b/user-story-includes-template.xml
index ee47c32b..e8c8405f 100644
--- a/user-story-includes-template.xml
+++ b/user-story-includes-template.xml
@@ -6,12 +6,12 @@
   xml:id="userstory-includes-template_version_1.1">
   <title>Including external content for user stories, version 1.3</title>
   <para>Save your user story file as associate-my-user-story-name, operator-my-user-story, etc. For
-    example my user story that I assigned myself is operator bug fix so the file name would be
+    example, the user story that I assigned myself is operator bug fix so the file name would be
     operator-fix-documentation-bug.xml. See the operator-fix-documentation-bug.xml file in the
     repository for more details.</para>
   <para>The include statements below are meant to help you tell and teach the user story. Include as
-    much content as necessary. Use examples.</para>
-  <para>Create diagrams through gdraw. Export as png. Reference as local file in the /figures/
+    much content as necessary and use examples.</para>
+  <para>Create diagrams through gdraw and export as png. Reference as local file in the /figures/
     director. Share as 'Anyone With the Link' can 'Edit' and add URL to the description so anyone
     else can update the original.</para>
   <para>
@@ -43,6 +43,6 @@
       <xi:fallback><para><mediaobject><imageobject><imagedata fileref="figures/openstack-training-remote-content-not-available.png" format="PNG"/></imageobject></mediaobject>Remote content not available</para><para>image source</para><para><link xlink:href="https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/1J2LZSxmc06xKyxMgPjv5fC0blV7qK6956-AeTmFOZD4/edit?usp=sharing">https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/1J2LZSxmc06xKyxMgPjv5fC0blV7qK6956-AeTmFOZD4/edit?usp=sharing</link></para></xi:fallback>
     </xi:include>-->
     <para><link xlink:href="https://blueprints.launchpad.net/openstack-manuals/+filebug" xlink:show="new">Submit a bug on
-      the section above. Short description for the bug summary. Paragraph for the description and
+      the section above. Leave a short description for the bug summary, a paragraph for the description and
       then tag with training-manuals.</link></para>
 </section>